Thursday, May 2, 2013

BROKEN FOREST - CYOA Blog Hop


Today I'm hosting a Choose Your Own Adventure blog hop written by the lovely Eliza Tilton, author of Broken Forest, which came out yesterday! Woo! So, without further ado...

If you’ve landed here during your adventure, skip all this and continue your adventure below.
If you’re wondering what’s going on, go here to start your own adventure!
And may The Creator bless you on your journey.


If you hunt with Tavo, he won’t let you tag anyone, but you may be able to figure out his trick.
“Yes,” you say.
You follow Tavo who follows the stream east—towards the wolves. This isn’t your first hunt, but you’ve yet to see a winter wolf. The stories your father tells, describe them as large white nightmares that hunt in packs. Facing a beast like that isn’t what you had in mind.
The stream winds around a large pine, and Tavo stops.
“Something wrong?” You scan the trees, searching.
“No, nothing’s wrong,” he says, turning to face you.
His dark eyes almost appear black, and the closer he steps, the more your pulse quickens. “Can I tell you a secret?”
You nod, curious to hear what the ‘great’ Tavo has to say.
His hands fidget and he can’t seem to look you in the eye.
“Tavo?”
When he doesn’t answer, you turn to leave. “I have no time for games,” you say.
Suddenly, Tavo is standing in front of you.
“What . . . .”
His lips press against yours, igniting a fire inside you. The fire grows as his hands travel from your face to your sides. It’s no secret you care for him, but to know he feels the same lifts you into the sky, whirling you around in bliss.
He pulls away. His hands find their way back to your face, caressing it.
“Forgive me for taking so long,” he says.
The kiss has distracted you, but you’re no fool. “How did you move so quickly?”
“That’s what I wanted to tell you.”
A wolf howls.
“But not now,” he says, grabbing your hand. “We need to move.”
Both of you run, following the stream until it ends at a pool where two wolves sit eating a dead animal. The sight of the massive beasts sends ripples of fear through you. You’re frozen in their presence.
Tavo steps in front of you, pushing you behind him. “Stay here,” he whispers.
Before you can argue he walks towards the wolves, his hands stretch out before him.
“Tavo!”
At the sound of your voice, the wolves look at you. Their eyes glow a sickly yellow. Keeping your gaze on the white creature, you grab your dagger. When the first wolf leaps, you throw the dagger straight into its eye. The wolf howls and thrashes its head back and forth, then runs back into the forest. It’s then you see the fire sprout from Tavo’s palms.
The fire covers the other wolf in a blanket of death.
Tavo grins, but he shouldn’t. Any magic user must be sent to The Order where they will be tested. The last villager that went to The Order was never seen again.
“Look Gwen.”
By the pond are bunches of black flowers, enough for the next two moons. You’re glad you survived the wolves, but terrified as to what will happen to your beloved Tavo when the elders learn of his secret.

END

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Broken Forest Goodreads blurb:
Hopeless he'll never be more than the boy who didn't save his brother, 17-year-old Avikar accepts his life as the family stable boy, trying to forget the past. But when his sister, Jeslyn, is kidnapped, the thought of losing another sibling catapults him on a desperate quest. With his best friend by his side, and using the tracking skills he learned from his father, he discovers Jeslyn has been taken, kidnapped by one Lucino, the young lord of Daath, a mystical place thought only to exist in fables.

And Lucino has plans for Jeslyn.

Author BIO:
Eliza graduated from Dowling College with a BS in Visual Communications. When she’s not arguing with excel at her day job, or playing Dragon Age 2, again, she’s writing. Her stories hold a bit of the fantastical and there’s always a romance. She resides on Long Island with her husband, two kids and one very snuggly pit bull.




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Monday, April 29, 2013

Adventures on World Book Night

A condensed screenplay in one and kind-of-one-half parts.

SCENE ONE

EXT. MAIN STREET NASHUA, NH - LATE AFTERNOON

A cold drizzle blows in gusts down an underpopulated sidewalk which is quaintly cobbled in red brick, because this is New England and it is New England's duty to have a high percentage of surfaces quaintly cobbled in red brick.  


Two intrepid women roam the cobbles armed with umbrellas and tote bags full of Good Omens by Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett. Ashley, Intrepid Woman No. 1, pauses to look intrepid in front of a wall quaintly cobbled in red brick.



Delia, Intrepid Woman No. 2, does the same. The picture is blurry, but she continues on her way (intrepidly) because she forgot to bring her good umbrella and her crappy one is about to turn inside out. She has stuffed her pockets full of bulky items and now looks as if she's with child.



DELIA
This doesn't look good. There aren't many people here.
ASHLEY
We're gonna rock this.
Delia gives Ashley a dubious look but continues down the street. Ashley makes the first move, approaching a passerby and offering a book. Her generous offer is refused. The Intrepid Women exchange a nervous glance and bolster their determination.

Delia approaches another passerby, explains the concept behind World Book Night (briefly) and thrusts a book at him. He takes it and thanks her. Success!
DELIA
That wasn't so bad.
ASHLEY
We are so gonna rock this.
Intrepid Women Nos. 1 and 2 continue down the street, pushing their wares on passersby, becoming more confident. They determine that the trick to getting a person to take a book is to actively shove one in that person's direction while they talk up WBN and reading in general, since most people feel rude refusing something that's being held out to them. Intrepid Woman No. 2 considers a career in flyer-pushing.

They encounter a few Characters who take the book (Man Smoking Outside of Restaurant, Woman Waiting For Ride) and some Characters who don't (Woman Who Refuses Because The Book Has Devil Horns But Still Thinks WBN Is A Neat Idea Even Though This Particular Book Is A Devil Book). They continue on, heartened by their success.

While Ashley discusses WBN with a Man on the Street, Delia notices that a Random Man has approached the nearby street corner and is waiting for the walk signal to change while glancing over his shoulder at the discussion. Glances turn to stares and Delia figures he's becoming offended at not having been offered a book yet. She removes a book from her tote. Ashley follows.

DELIA
Excuse me, sir. It's World Book Night! We're offering a free book to help get people reading. Would you like one?
RANDOM MAN
What book is it?
DELIA
It's a book called Good Omens. It's a comedy about the apocalypse.
RANDOM MAN 
What's an apocalypse?
DELIA
The end of the world.
RANDOM MAN
So it's non-fiction.
ASHLEY
I...uh...No. It's fiction. It's a comedy.
Random Man smiles in a way that makes Delia and Ashley think maybe he's not entirely there all the time.

RANDOM MAN
Well, if I don't read it, someone else might.
DELIA
That's right! You can always pass it on. So, yeah. Enjoy! Oh, hey...crossing light...we're just gonna...
Ashley and Delia hustle their butts across a side street while Random Man stuffs the book into his overfull backpack. 

The Intrepid Women continue on, but have to turn around when they've reached the end of the street without meeting more people. When they turn around, Random Man is still standing on the corner. They cross to the other side of the street. 

After a pass down that side of the street, Random Man has gone his way and they once more stalk their territory, waving books while they chase down pedestrians. They've given away thirteen of their twenty books, but the emptying streets have them wondering aloud whether they should continue here. They agree to one more pass down the street. They turn.

RANDOM MAN
Thanks again for the book.
DELIA AND ASHLEY
OhYou'reWelcomeWeHopeYouEnjoyItHaveAGoodNight!
DELIA (under breath)
So I'm kinda hungry. Are you hungry?
ASHLEY
Yes. Hungry. Let's go.
DELIA
How's Mexican?
ASHLEY
We rocked this.

SCENE KIND-OF-ONE-HALF

INT. MEXICAN RESTAURANT

Ashley and Delia sit at a table in an Old Mill Building Near a River, because this is New England and it's New England's duty to have restaurants in Old Mill Buildings Near Rivers. Also, made of red brick.
T. - WAITER
Good evening, ladies. Can I --
ASHLEY
Have you ever heard of World Book Night?
Delia and Ashley are relieved of their remaining seven copies by the Waitstaff of the Mexican Restaurant who have read the first page of T's copy and now have to read the second. (Except this one waitress who has already read the book and, therefore, enthusiastically pushes a copy on the people at one of her tables.)

Ashley and Delia fistbump to their success over an obscene amount of sour cream.

FADE TO BLACK



Tuesday, April 23, 2013

It's World Book Night!

It's here! It's here! The day I've been dreading awaiting excitedly is here!

I have all my stuff ready to go. See?


Twenty copies of Good Omens (of which I am inordinately fond), bookmarks, recipient letters, and a little tote bag to carry them all around whilst I foist them upon unsuspecting citizens. It's going to be terrifying fabtastic!

My gorgeous critique partner, Ashley Turcotte, will be accompanying me on this odyssey, so I won't be foisting alone, which is awesome. (Holy commas, Batman.) I will bring a camera. Should I actually remember to take it out of my pocket and use it, there will be pictures.

Wish me luck! (By which I mean, pray that no one maces me.)